Feedback and Corrections

While my classmates and I presented our Mid Term productions to the class, our teacher, Mr. Elsbree, had us write down some things that were good about the other's presentations, and some things they would need to improve. Once ours was shown, Marin and I were greeted with positive and negative feedback alike. Positive feedback consisted of the humor and entertainment the film conveyed, the talent of the actors, and a clear, understandable plot along with excellent editing and shots. This proved we succeeded in script writing, casting, and shooting, and post production visual effects/editing. However, we were also informed of some aspects of our film we needed to alter in order to create an improved version. Some constructive criticism included the lines of the actors getting lost or not heard, the watermark over our film, and occasionally the camera became a little shaky. We fully intend on correcting these errors, as we can re-shoot and voice over some scenes to fix the audio, transfer the movie to another editing website to erase the watermark, and re-shoot and smooth scenes out any shakiness. Receiving criticism as well as positive feedback was extremely beneficial to our process as we create the best version of a film we can make.